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You went in the room
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That’s a crazy thought (f/n) why would you jump from a window, the room will keep you safer. You entered and saw a green room with a refined wood dresser, a wooden bed with green blankets to match the wall, and a old TV. Closing the door you went to admired the woodwork .Then footsteps that sounded as if they were heading up the stairs brought you out of it.

 “ Where can I hide, Where?!” You thought mad at yourself for not thinking beforehand.

 The door swung open showing an angry Italian. “ Bella, Why must you run from me?”

“ Because you’re crazy and Killed Feliciano!” You yelled at him with a bitter voice.

“ I didn’t kill him; yet,” He grinned “ I thought I’d let you have the honor of watching since last time you got knocked out somehow."

You said nothing back to him but your expression of shocked yet relieved told him what I needed and hated to know. ‘If he didn’t kill him yet he must have kept him somewhere close by so he can’t escape, so maybe he’s here with me..’ You ran to the door as fast as you could to try and find him but Feli2 was quicker so you went slamming into the door. 
You fell onto the ground, as your hand instinctively went to your head that was throbbing from the pain and swelling into a bump. Feli2 used this time to lock the door and kneeled down to you. 

“ Why would you try to leave me like that,bella?” He gripped your cheeks between his hands, “ You won’t try to do that again, now will you?”

You didn’t know whether to say yes or not since you would try again and again until you and Feliciano were out of there. 

“  Are you going to stay with me; (f/n)” He had pauses between the words to make sure you understood him.You spit on his face. His hand gripped your face harder as he started to grow furious. Feli2 moved his hands to grab a knife that was hidden unknowingly to you in his boot to kill you there. But instead he stopped and swatted you across the cheek. He then hoisted you up and dropped you on the bed.

 You were nervous about his next move, he had a sly look on his face with all the ideas going through his head to do. He grasped your hands and pinned them above the bed with one hand, the other he grabbed the back of your head and pulled you in for a rough, sloppy kiss. His tongue forced it’s way into your mouth even with all your protest and struggling it worked to no avail. He bit down on your tongue as to show you he’s in charge, you tried to bite him back but he seemed to have enjoyed it. 
Once he had finished his excruciatingly long kiss you were gasping for air.

“ Now for some real fun,” he pulled the knife out of his boot, you screeched slightly at the sight of blood still on it. Feli2 took it to your shirt and started to cut it off, you started to struggle causing the knife to slice through your skin, it stung and began to bleed crimson on your (fav colour) shirt. 

 “(F/N) if you stop struggling you’ll be in less pain,” Fel2 said, but it wouldn't stop you.

 He got cut the last final strands of your shirt revealing your skin and (Fav colour) bra that was soon to become red ((if it’s red it will become a darker red then brown)). His eye’s filled with hunger to see underneath it; when the sound of heavy footsteps coming slowly up the stairs. Feli2 pulled out a pair of handcuffs and put them on you and around the bed frame so you couldn’t run. He waited a couple feet away from the door with the knife that was previously cutting your shirt to shreds. The door opened to show-!
I finally updated, been awhile hasn't since I put up a story huh? About 2 months for this story, I feel like I lost my co-author now since I've had to write this all now with out her helping me but I do have my friends IRL to help and they think it's good. Please Comment I do read it even if I don't reply :iconluvluvplz:
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Other option for Left Path: [link]
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Wait around like a rock: [link]
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CaileyChan Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
more plzzzz :iconmoarplz:
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CaileyChan Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
love how u give so many options !!
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jkls39 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
More~!!!! Please! I want more!!!!! O_O
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zekka12 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
not funny with the sticky notes!
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Marcysowicked2434 Featured By Owner May 3, 2013
Nooooooooooooes my shirt!!!!!!!!!i would of jumped out the window at my chance ::(
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Bashiix12 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Dem cliffhangers. Dem cliffhangers dun like me.


But awesome story though!!! Can't wait for the options. x3
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NinjaBug123 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013
This is so cool! I like your option of choosing. :) But when are you going to add the other 2 options? I'm so excited! :D
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I tend to write whenever I can find time so it can take from a day if I have plenty of time to months. Also this story was meant to have only one direction oddly so I have to think what would happen in different situations of one action ^^;. I'm glad you think the story is cool, it makes writing worth while :iconletmehugyouplz:
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NinjaBug123 Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013
xD No problem, i can't wait for the next part. :)
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sakunae Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why are cliffhangers so fun to use? Why?! This is one of those moments when I look back and regret using them... BECAUSE IT FEELS AWFUL! *cries*
I quite like this. I like making my own choices and stuff. Ah... Stuff.... Explains so much yet so little at the same time...
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry? If I don't have a cliff hanger I don't know where else to stop properly. Thank you for liking my story it makes me feel honored to have fans :icongrillfaceplz:. Is there anything you'd like explained if you're confused and if you have any suggestions on how you want the story to go you can note me, I love others ideas ^^
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sakunae Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If I think of anything - you shall be the first to know.
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY! Free ideas! It can be anything from "the door opened to show Pancakes they had grown legs and where here for revenge, to realize this was 2P!Italy's house and not 1P!Canada's." XD to " the door opened to reveal Feliciano being carried by Ludwig, but his face had a scary scar on it and his uniform was brown with a white wife beater underneath". Tell me if you think of anything~
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sakunae Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
....Interesting... At least it is open minded!
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not going to use the idea's I listed though since it would be a spoil in the comment section, which would make me feel as though I ruined the surprise.
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sakunae Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
'Tis a shame...
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry it's just I already wrote the start of one of the option and it'd be wierd if two different people came in for whether reader-chan struggles or sits like a rock ^^;
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shadowleira Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012   Writer
heh... door opened... why are people always cutting up my clothes? it sucks... i need those >.>
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hetalialuvr46 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cliffhangers are my mortal enemies
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Mwahaha!
It's funny, I wasn't originally planning on this being a cliff hanger but I wanted to do another path since I like choose your own adventures:iconderpfaceplz:
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hetalialuvr46 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes(?)
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hetalialuvr46 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool
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HetaliaFan14 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you look through all of the stories there will be different paths like this one you could have jumped out a window or enter the room. if you jumped out the window you died. thank you for thinking it's cool, I don't think lots of people do this style a lot anymore but I heard it was popular awhile back ago since it gave people a choice and lets them be the star ((sorry for posting really long comments that probably have nothing to do with what you might be meaning ^^;))
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hetalialuvr46 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah I enjoy reading series that have choose your own path (nah it's fine)
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Cheezit1x1 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
I lilke it! ^^ I cant wait for you to make another one!
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XShadow-Wolf-DemonX Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Writer
CLIFFHANGERS. :icondarkrageplz:
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
I really likes this so far^^
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